Thursday, 11 May 2017

Blue Shoes

I am the colour blue. I am made of rubber. I am always being worn by someone. My owner loves me, Whenever my owner wears me he gets lucky.
One day my owner went to the basketball court but my owner didn't wear me and my owner bought a new pair of shoes. My owner threw me in the rubbish bin. That night my owner didn't sleep and that night my owner went outside to see in the rubbish bin, my owner grabbed me and he went inside the house. Next day my owner wears me at basketball sports and he gets the win. I feel great and happy because I get back to my owners foot.

In my writing I have used Repetition.
My next step is to use more Similes.

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